It is retty good but the people are unproportuinate, you empasize the head and face to much, and the legs are to short you should try to make a shoulder and head and neck portaits. The background is plain i mean wouldn`t you expect there to be some anmals on the farm? Nice work on the cloths though. The sky would look better with the sunset in the backround. The multi coloured hair was a good idea. I am sorry if i was mean to you and your picture I know that i am not that good of a artist.
you have a good pont alpha, but, due the limitation of Spacer, thereīs no animals on the background, and Iīm agree with the leg things a little, but is hard to fix them too